| This section contains first chapters of stories. I hope one catches your eye, and you start reading... Please comment or critique on any of my written pieces - all external input really encourages me to continue and improve in my writing. Flow (incomplete, 9 chapters, ongoing) A science-fiction story involving a boy named Tom. An organisation, led by "The Five" has sent agents to find Tom and to... well, you'll see. Gold (complete, 5 chapters) A young teen story, revolving around a strange old man who paints his house gold each and every day. POP (complete, 6 chapters) A psychological exploration of daydreams. He (complete, 16 chapters) A psychological look into the mind of one killer from after the deed has been done. WARNING: contains a small amount of gore and dark themes. Unholy Dragon (complete, 1 chapter) A fantasy story set in the wild west. It involves tattoos, dragons, and a good old fashioned draw. The Great War (incomplete, 8 chapters, stagnant) A fantasy story set in a world of elves and men. We begin in the middle of the war between elves and men, the Great War. This war is stopped by a brave young elf by the name of Anret. The story follows his legacy through the many years of his life, and beyond; describing how he folled an entire race, and changed the course fo history... San (incomplete, 2 chapters, stagnant) This is a fantasy/sci-fi story following the "San's" as they go around the wild west, battling people along the way, and turning them into... something else. Help (incomplete, 2 chapters, stagnant) A comical look into an RPG world. Magic, quests, monsters, weird names... You get the idea. |
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Flow: Chapter 11Tom slowly came out of his stupor and became angry. "So... What does this mean? Is there something weird about me? Am I some sort of genetic experiment? That's why you strapped me to a chair. That's why you lit me on fire, you...!" "You will show respect!" K boomed. In an instant the wind was back, and the screen wobbled in the breeze. The doors behind it gave out a quiet but threatening rattle. Tom was startled at first, but soon got a grip. He walked silently over to the throne he was sitting on previously, and sat at an angle, leaning back defiantly; determined to not be intimidated by these people. K walked over to him. The grFlow: Chapter 11
by *Whothehellisthat
Flow: Chapter 10K pushed a button on the remote, and instantly the room went dark. Then a fan started whirring above them, and light started to be projected onto the doors. As a final touch, a white screen half fell from a hole in the ceiling, and hung infront of them, swaying slightly. Tom looked over at K, a quizzical look on his face. "Film night?" K suggested, playfully. Tom faced the front, waiting for something to show on the screen. K continued. "Seen Star Wars?" "Episode 1 onwards, yeah. That double-sword guy kicks ass... The rest sucked." "I know what you mean. You really should watch the first three. Much better writteFlow: Chapter 10
by *Whothehellisthat
Flow: Chapter 9"So where are the others?" Tom asked, nodding at the other empty thrones. "Oh, around..." the white haired man dismissed. "Right..." Tom mumbled, disbelieving. Probably kidnapping and experimenting on other kids. "I'm 'K', by the way. One of the Five, as you've no doubt figured out. The guys in black brought you to me because they think you've had trouble adjusting. Right?" "You could say that. But anyone kidnapped - twice - wouldn't just sit still while their captors strap them to chairs and light them on fire." Whilst Tom was surprised at how civilly this 'K' was treating him, he was still cheesed off. What did he exFlow: Chapter 9
by *Whothehellisthat
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I would kill for a nobel peace prize
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*watchesnowlol*
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But my house is not made of macaroni :[
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
I'm flattered you think so...
Would you like one? I warn you - I'm not that great yet, so nothing too fancy
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If you wanted to make one for fun and send it to me though, I'd be totally down for that!
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
If I ever make another one, it'll be yours for the taking
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
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Welcome to life. It seems you have missed our prep class!-~lildoodles
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