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Page 9. Kid, enter stage right.
[edit:16/03/09] Added thoughts. Tweaked Kid close-up to be more identifyable.
[edit:16/03/09] Added thoughts. Tweaked Kid close-up to be more identifyable.
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Do I see bigger hands there?
And I just love Bait's D: expression. And that you make the diary sort of spin makes me laugh.
The panel with the hands is a bit unclear. Maybe you could add some thoughts or something, to make it more clear that Bait is being uncertain about his own powerlessness.
And the panel with the grin might look better if you'd have more of Kid's face, with his eyes obscured by his hair and some shadow.
But that's just my own opinion.
And I just love Bait's D: expression. And that you make the diary sort of spin makes me laugh.
The panel with the hands is a bit unclear. Maybe you could add some thoughts or something, to make it more clear that Bait is being uncertain about his own powerlessness.
And the panel with the grin might look better if you'd have more of Kid's face, with his eyes obscured by his hair and some shadow.
But that's just my own opinion.